Hi Carlos, first off welcome to BS.N. Second, you should formally introduce yourself in the member intro section.
Ok, your armor.
Helmet: Visor still looks a little wonky to me, but overall not a bad job with the mods. Your decals have to be fixed though on the back of the helmet as they're not accurate.
Armor: Your left shoulder bell looks way bigger then your right. Did you trim them at all? Your rank stripes on the tank are on the wrong side and are too thick. Looks like SC armor, though I don't know why you would have needed to replace the tank topper, unless the armor was a recast.
Soft armor: Pouches are on the wrong side. You have a wee bit too much of a camel toe, and your ribs are barely visible. I can't tell how many you have. You should have 7 vertical stitches, giving you 6 ribs on your bund. They could just use some more batting to make them pop a little more
Boots: Are those Caboots? If so I hope you didn't pay too much for them, as there are members here who can make you more accurate boots for a better price.
Other then the shoulder bell, I don't see much that wouldn't get you approved. Should you ever decide to go for Lancer status however, there are a bunch of things you would need to get fixed.
Any questions, ask away.