Hey Robert, here is some feedback from the Lancer review team. Great build overall!
Aerator on the snout needs to be painted black.
Pouches need to be separated a bit so you can see all the ribs on the bund between them.
Cod section on the bund is too low. Need to pull the bund up a few inches (just below the side straps on the chest/back) and loosen the crotch strap off a bit.
The bicep greeblies appear to be Don-Jarr, which are not accurate.