Looks good. It appears that the belt needs to come down a alittle, it's riding up under your pouches from the pictures. TD looks a little off to the side on positioning. The drop boxes could come up more as well (they look longer on the front a tad). Not sure the rank stripes on the holster are correct for clearance though. You're almost there!
I did the same, except no velcro to hold it up. I'm not planning on walking around with my blaster in my holster anyways, unless it's for a picture, and I don't want to hold my blaster. I'd prefer to walk around with it in my hand, to be safe.
I think Jim would be a great leader for Star Garrison's ART in the works, I know there's already talks of one, but nothing has been made concrete. I'd like to help out with getting one setup when the time comes.