jadloc Posted May 21, 2019 Share Posted May 21, 2019 TB-83107 FanWars Garrison helmet - SC armor - SC all soft parts - 4505Marclel boots - gloves - blaster pistol - I don't know, all the costume comes from 4505Marcel. I hope I do not forget anything Games are made, ... 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Retrofire Posted May 22, 2019 Share Posted May 22, 2019 Thank you for your submission! The Lancer review team will review your application and get back to you. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chopper Posted May 23, 2019 Share Posted May 23, 2019 Hi Loïc and thank you very much for your application! The Level 2 review team has reviewed your photos and we have some feedback that we'd like you to address: Helmet -The close up detail of the MLC helmet shows that the upper snout detail is painted grey with vent holes cut into the plastic. For level 2, the grey and black detail should use a decal, with no holes, as per the film helmets. Example below: Flight Suit -The leg elastic on your flight suit is quite tight. You should loosen it slightly. -You will need to add a collar closure to your flight suit -Your back flap appears to be too narrow. Ideally, it should extend approximately 1.5" (38mm) further on each side for proper fitment Shoulder Armor, Chest Armor, Back Armor -Your back armor is pulling your chest armor up, which is then pulling back your shoulder bells. You should look at affixing your chest armor onto your front, so it doesn't slide back. Also, you might need to trim a very small amount of the back armor shoulder bridge, so everything aligns and sits properly. -Your should bridge covers appear to be 1.5" (40mm), they should be between 0.5" (12mm) and 1" (25mm) wide as per the CRL. -Your side straps appear to use 1.5" (40mm) cotton twill tape. As per the CRL, they should be white cotton webbing. Upper Arm Armor -Bicep armor strapping appears to be 35mm. As per the CRL, it should be 50mm. Forearm Armor and Gloves -When you re-take your photos, please reposition your forearm armor lower, so they overlap the gloves. Cummerbund -Please move your pouches outwards, so they sit approximately 1 inch from the outermost cummerbund rib on each side. Belt and Detonator -Your detonator tubing appears to be silver. It should be medium to light grey. -Can you please provide detail shots on the drop box webbing? From your overalls shots it looks like the same twill tape that was used for the side webbing? If so, the strapping there should also be 1.5 inches (38mm) wide and made of white cotton webbing. Knee Armor -The rivets securing the upper elastic strap are painted white. As per the CRL, the rivets should be silver in color. I realize this seems like a lengthy list, but a great deal of it is strapping and fitment adjustments. The entire Level 2 team is here if you need any assistance, advice, or guidance. Please let us know. Thank you again. You can do this! 1 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jadloc Posted May 23, 2019 Author Share Posted May 23, 2019 thank you chopper for your feedback. I will work on the corrections I understand. and I come back to you for more details for others, because my English is very bad. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chopper Posted May 23, 2019 Share Posted May 23, 2019 7 hours ago, jadloc said: thank you chopper for your feedback. I will work on the corrections I understand. and I come back to you for more details for others, because my English is very bad. I understand. We'll do our best to clarify whatever questions you have. 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jadloc Posted June 14, 2019 Author Share Posted June 14, 2019 Helmet -The close up detail of the MLC helmet shows that the upper snout detail is painted grey with vent holes cut into the plastic. For level 2, the grey and black detail should use a decal, with no holes, as per the film helmets. Flight Suit -The leg elastic on your flight suit is quite tight. You should loosen it slightly. -You will need to add a collar closure to your flight suit -Your back flap appears to be too narrow. Ideally, it should extend approximately 1.5" (38mm) further on each side for proper fitment Shoulder Armor, Chest Armor, Back Armor -Your back armor is pulling your chest armor up, which is then pulling back your shoulder bells. You should look at affixing your chest armor onto your front, so it doesn't slide back. Also, you might need to trim a very small amount of the back armor shoulder bridge, so everything aligns and sits properly. -Your should bridge covers appear to be 1.5" (40mm), they should be between 0.5" (12mm) and 1" (25mm) wide as per the CRL. -Your side straps appear to use 1.5" (40mm) cotton twill tape. As per the CRL, they should be white cotton webbing. Upper Arm Armor -Bicep armor strapping appears to be 35mm. As per the CRL, it should be 50mm. Forearm Armor and Gloves -When you re-take your photos, please reposition your forearm armor lower, so they overlap the gloves. Cummerbund -Please move your pouches outwards, so they sit approximately 1 inch from the outermost cummerbund rib on each side. modifications made: Belt and Detonator -Your detonator tubing appears to be silver. It should be medium to light grey. -Can you please provide detail shots on the drop box webbing? From your overalls shots it looks like the same twill tape that was used for the side webbing? If so, the strapping there should also be 1.5 inches (38mm) wide and made of white cotton webbing. Knee Armor -The rivets securing the upper elastic strap are painted white. As per the CRL, the rivets should be silver in color. here we go again 🤞🤞 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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