TK-Teri Posted May 10, 2019 Share Posted May 10, 2019 Teri Moore 21129 Southern California Garrison/Inland Empire Squad Armor: Studio CreationsFlight suit: Modified DickiesBoots: Made by myself and SL-38411 All soft parts: Made by myself and SL-38411Gloves: TrooperbayBlaster: Inland Empire Armory Hoping I have everything that you need for review. If not, I know you let me know. (Please excuse the puppy hair!) Thanks for your time and consideration. Teri 1 - Front 2 - Front arms out 3 - Back 4 - Back arms out 5 - Right side 6 - Right side arms out 7 - Left side 8 - Left side arms out 9 - Action shot 10 - Gloves 11 - TD 12 - Tank 13 - Tank strap 14 - Tank rivet 15 - Boots front 16 - Boots back 17 - Boots vent 18 - Boots velcro 19 - Helcro bolt divot 20 - Collar 21 - Front riding patches 22 - Back riding patches 23 - Thigh straps 24 - Butt flap 25 - Vest back 26 - Vest sleeve 27 - Shoulder bell 28 - Shoulder bell elastic 29 - Chest back strapping 30 - Bicep strapping 31 - Forearm strapping 32 - Knee bottom strapping 33 - Knee top strapping 34 - Belt box strapping 35 - Belt rivets 36 - Cummerbund velcro 37 - Cummerbund ribs 38 - Codpiece strapping 39 - Pouch width 40 - Pouch height 41 - Pouch flap bottom 42 - Pouch depth 43 - Blaster a 44 - Blaster b Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Stroker Posted May 10, 2019 Share Posted May 10, 2019 Thanks for the app! We'll go over it and get back with you! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chopper Posted May 13, 2019 Share Posted May 13, 2019 Hi Teri, thank you very much for your Lancer deployment request! Overall, we think you did an excellent job. I'm really impressed with your soft goods, as well as how you modified the SC helmet eye slot to look more screen accurate. We do have some corrections below that we'd like you to make for your application: Chest/Back Armor and Belt It looks like your chest and back armor is riding quite low, which is pushing down your belt positioning. I recommend that you look at repositioning your chest and back armor higher on your body. This will entail trimming the front and rear shoulder bridges a bit more, and you might want to look a small amount off of the bottom ridge of the chest armor as well. The image below is a guideline for a better armor and belt position. Bicep Armor Once you get your chest armor re-adjusted, you will likely need to bring your bicep armor up about an inch bit as well. Shoulder Armor Please sand the vertical edge where you cut in on both bells a bit smoother. Right now it looks like a hard angle and it should be rounded. Tank and Pistol Please refinish your tank topper and pistol so the 3D printed ridges are no longer visible. I recommend using Rustoleum high build primer to help eliminate the print lines. https://www.homedepot.com/p/Rust-Oleum-Automotive-12-oz-Gray-2-in-1-Filler-Sandable-Primer-Spray-260510/205751603?MERCH=REC-_-PIPHorizontal2_rr-_-202097276-_-204707457-_-N OPTIONAL UPDATES: Belt The nylon webbing at the back of the belt should be 2", though it's not currently listed in the CRL, which is 100% on us. The webbing in your photos looks a bit narrower than 2", so if this is the case, you might want to consider upgrading it in the future. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TK-Teri Posted May 13, 2019 Author Share Posted May 13, 2019 11 hours ago, Chopper said: Hi Teri, thank you very much for your Lancer deployment request! Overall, we think you did an excellent job. I'm really impressed with your soft goods, as well as how you modified the SC helmet eye slot to look more screen accurate. We do have some corrections below that we'd like you to make for your application: Chest/Back Armor and Belt It looks like your chest and back armor is riding quite low, which is pushing down your belt positioning. I recommend that you look at repositioning your chest and back armor higher on your body. This will entail trimming the front and rear shoulder bridges a bit more, and you might want to look a small amount off of the bottom ridge of the chest armor as well. The image below is a guideline for a better armor and belt position. Bicep Armor Once you get your chest armor re-adjusted, you will likely need to bring your bicep armor up about an inch bit as well. Shoulder Armor Please sand the vertical edge where you cut in on both bells a bit smoother. Right now it looks like a hard angle and it should be rounded. Tank and Pistol Please refinish your tank topper and pistol so the 3D printed ridges are no longer visible. I recommend using Rustoleum high build primer to help eliminate the print lines. https://www.homedepot.com/p/Rust-Oleum-Automotive-12-oz-Gray-2-in-1-Filler-Sandable-Primer-Spray-260510/205751603?MERCH=REC-_-PIPHorizontal2_rr-_-202097276-_-204707457-_-N OPTIONAL UPDATES: Belt The nylon webbing at the back of the belt should be 2", though it's not currently listed in the CRL, which is 100% on us. The webbing in your photos looks a bit narrower than 2", so if this is the case, you might want to consider upgrading it in the future. Thanks for your feedback. I'll get to work on the corrections asap and resubmit photos. Teri 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TK-Teri Posted May 14, 2019 Author Share Posted May 14, 2019 Here are my resubmission photos..... Thank you for your consideration and review. Teri 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Stroker Posted May 14, 2019 Share Posted May 14, 2019 Looking good! Thanks for the updates and we"ll get back with you. 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chopper Posted May 15, 2019 Share Posted May 15, 2019 Teri, The Level 2 review team has reviewed your submission and we're happy to report that we approve your application as Lancer! Congratulations! You did a great job! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TK-Teri Posted May 15, 2019 Author Share Posted May 15, 2019 7 minutes ago, Chopper said: Teri, The Level 2 review team has reviewed your submission and we're happy to report that we approve your application as Lancer! Congratulations! You did a great job! THANK YOU!! Proud and honored to be here! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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