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[Fluffy Fuzzball]

Hi @ll

 

today we finished the wathering of my beloved tree-dodger .. the sun was nearly gone, so we had to rush a bit taking photos (not the best idea, need to do new ones with more/better light)

 

i was so happy we had finish the project and taken some shots for clearence, but when i checked them at home i recognized a few little things that need to be adjust for the "real deal"

 

the butt looks to puffy/naggy (dont know why)

the belt sits to high (need to be a bit lower)

the upper arms came down

 

and yes, we forgot to take a picture from the complete front side with helmet

 

and now ... open for critics

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

[cheesewhoopy]

I like the subtle weathering, nice job. Biggest things that stand out to me are the baggy pants, the camel toe on the cod, the bicep position and the color of the boot soles. For the pants area, if possible you might want to look into getting them tightened up a bit, and see if you can maybe pull them up in the back so they don't sag so much. For the cod, try adjusting strap so it isn't so tight and bunching the fabric between your legs. Or if you re do it, add a piece of rubber or curved plastic in there to prevent any bunching. As for the soles, they should be tan. They appear to be white in your photos. Maybe you could paint over them? For the biceps you want them to line up with the forearms and be visible from the front view. Try adding Velcro to the flight suit and under the biceps to keep them in place. And where you are wearing your belt is fine I wouldn't change that. Also you could maybe bring the drop boxes up a bit. Overall you did a pretty good job brother. I would just look into those few things.

 

 

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[Fluffy Fuzzball]

thx for the hints .. the soles actually are tan..must be the light