JSwann Posted August 22, 2016 Share Posted August 22, 2016 (edited) Hi everyone! Just got my approval last week, and we're hard at work getting me to Lancer level in ART Viper. I thought I'd go ahead and toss up the photos I have and get feedback ASAP to get me the rest of the way! Here we go! Helmet: SC Armor: SC Flightsuit: Modified Red Kapp Blaster: Hyperfirm Gloves: Wampawear Boots: Bought 'em from Blitz! Forgot where he got them from... All other soft bits: Made by my girlfriend! Edit: Figured out how to link to stuff properly Edited August 26, 2016 by Griffin-X Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Forest Ranger Posted August 22, 2016 Share Posted August 22, 2016 Thank you Jonathan! We'll review, and get back with you Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JSwann Posted August 22, 2016 Author Share Posted August 22, 2016 Thanks for the swift reply! I fixed the original post after remembering how forums work. My first personal comment is I fear I may have over-adjusted my drop boxes to fix their droop. The green-screen pic is their current configuration. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BikerScout007 Posted August 25, 2016 Share Posted August 25, 2016 Okay here we go: 1) First and foremost -- your vest sleeves are too long and are ballooning out from under your shoulder bells. They are also covering up your bicep armor. 2) For your height, I think your pouches are a bit too big for you. They should fit pretty squarely in between your chest armor and belt with just a little overhang. 3) Your thigh straps are too low. They should be pointing more toward the bottom of the codpiece. Raise them up about 3 inches or so. 4) Your riding patches don't seem to be coming around the back of your legs at all. Or this could be because your suit legs are very baggy and maybe it's crumpled up in the fabric? You need to get some of that bagginess out of the legs (stirrups around your feet may help too) 5) I know snaps are wonderful but we want that extra knee strap actually riveted in place 6) Your boot shafts are too tight and too low. They should be a bit looser and extend up so that they are only about an inch below the knee armor. 7) And just general tidiness for your next round of pics: arm armor should be turned forward and positioned so that your bicep armor is on your bicep and that your forearm armor is just barely overlapping the glove. Shoulder bells should also be turned more forward. Make sure your bund does not droop below your belt -- it may be too long. I know you realized there was a dropbox issue. Make sure they are balanced on both sides and not sitting so far forward on your legs. Thanks for your application and good luck with this round of changes! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BikerScout007 Posted August 25, 2016 Share Posted August 25, 2016 Oh I'm sorry, one more thing: some pics of your blaster would be great Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JSwann Posted August 26, 2016 Author Share Posted August 26, 2016 Ah yes I forgot the blaster pics! Thanks for the feedback. I'll have some updates for you as soon as I can work on it! Just to be clear: So you want the knee straps riveted directly onto the knee armor? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BikerScout007 Posted August 26, 2016 Share Posted August 26, 2016 Ah yes I forgot the blaster pics! Thanks for the feedback. I'll have some updates for you as soon as I can work on it! Just to be clear: So you want the knee straps riveted directly onto the knee armor? Correct sir! Sent from my LG-H830 using Tapatalk Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JSwann Posted April 24, 2017 Author Share Posted April 24, 2017 I'm still working on things when I can. Just got in some new boots and trying to make some flight suit adjustments! 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Griffin-X Posted May 15, 2017 Share Posted May 15, 2017 I'm still working on things when I can. Just got in some new boots and trying to make some flight suit adjustments! Sounds good, keep us posted! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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